I was mainly just confused as a first time reader seeing there mustve been a previous chapter(?) but then I guess the whole story was edited for april fools LOL
It's a very good story foundation but I very much recommend a good editor/proofreader as there are tons of grammar issues and some typos. The description alone has your instead of you're and a bunch of run-on sentences.
Wishing the best as I really do want to see this story grow and thrive!!
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I was mainly just confused as a first time reader seeing there mustve been a previous chapter(?) but then I guess the whole story was edited for april fools LOL
Bruh i was so excited lol. open it up and bam! smile wiped right off my face smhhh lol
Seriously I'm excited to read and then... 🌚
I can hear my heart falling into pieces from miles away...
Ouch...
It's a very good story foundation but I very much recommend a good editor/proofreader as there are tons of grammar issues and some typos. The description alone has your instead of you're and a bunch of run-on sentences.
Wishing the best as I really do want to see this story grow and thrive!!
is there anywhere I can follow the development of this IF like Tumblr? im really interested in this IF<3
Yes there is!
https://fateunwritten-if.tumblr.com/
like looking at a blip at the distance
Looks interesting but it's very short rn
Yes it is quite short. But I am working on an update!