Nice start :) hope you stick with it. Just a small critique: The amount of skin color choices is out of this world lol. Most people are not going to look up each term to see what color it is. I understand you are trying to be inclusive, but, bruh lol. Maybe get the primary tones (black, tan, white) and then give those tones a light, mid, and dark value for each. That right there is already 12, and even that might be too much, but it cuts down half your choices and is still incisive to all shades.
It's a little unintuitive for a person who might not be familiar with IFs or with IFs that have primarily manual setup from the pronouns. They could move the example out of the entry box, or even set up a small thing so that the player can know they've done it right.
I was thinking the same. Like maybe keep the text type option for those who have the more specific pronouns they want; yet have the basic multi choice preset options too, for the common ones. To avoid confusion.
And I also agree, remove the text from out of the box itself so people don't have to delete and re-type every time. The example can be put to the side or under the box.
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The font is hard to look at...not the color but the actual font. I'd say maybe add more font options, if that's possible.
Other than that, not much to give an outward opinion but based on the summary i'm looking forward to more
Nice start already pretty interesting.
Nice start :) hope you stick with it. Just a small critique: The amount of skin color choices is out of this world lol. Most people are not going to look up each term to see what color it is. I understand you are trying to be inclusive, but, bruh lol. Maybe get the primary tones (black, tan, white) and then give those tones a light, mid, and dark value for each. That right there is already 12, and even that might be too much, but it cuts down half your choices and is still incisive to all shades.
You might want to tweak how the pronouns choice works, I can really see someone messing it up currently.
? What's wrong with it? It's not rocket science to figure out
It's a little unintuitive for a person who might not be familiar with IFs or with IFs that have primarily manual setup from the pronouns. They could move the example out of the entry box, or even set up a small thing so that the player can know they've done it right.
I was thinking the same. Like maybe keep the text type option for those who have the more specific pronouns they want; yet have the basic multi choice preset options too, for the common ones. To avoid confusion.
And I also agree, remove the text from out of the box itself so people don't have to delete and re-type every time. The example can be put to the side or under the box.
That sounds like a good idea! I'll add it to the next update
Glitches on android phone
I'm sorry about that. I'm unsure how to fix this but I'll try and see if there is a way.
Light mode, please ;-;
I added much lighter text. I'll try my best to find a way to add a light mode I promise
Interesting start, look forward to more!