Fate Unwritten

I feel bad my silly comment is the only recent thing for this IF lol

So with the update I gave the story a read and I can say that I'm definitely interested! There are some cool aspects at play and the characters are likable w/ clear distinct personalities 

I was mainly just confused as a first time reader seeing there mustve been a previous chapter(?) but then I guess the whole story was edited for april fools LOL

Bruh i was so excited lol. open it up and bam! smile wiped right off my face smhhh lol

Seriously I'm excited to read and then... 🌚

I can hear my heart falling into pieces from miles away...

Ouch...

It's a very good story foundation but I very much recommend a good editor/proofreader as there are tons of grammar issues and some typos. The description alone has your instead of you're and a bunch of run-on sentences.

Wishing the best as I really do want to see this story grow and thrive!!

like looking at a blip at the distance